短文改错要改十个错误

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短文改错要改十个错误
In early January this year,the rate of UFO reports were steady,around three per weeks.When,however,on Monday ,january 16 ,a science fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on television,there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler ,who directly responsible for the study of all such reports,decided to making his finding known.They wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements.Follow this explanation ,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sighting,because the rate remained above the previous level.

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更正在括号处注明,总共十处错误.
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In early January this year,the rate of UFO reports (were改成was) steady,around three per (weeks改成week).When,however,on Monday,January 16,a science fiction film about visitors (to改成from) outer space was shown on television,there was (the改成an) immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who (加入was) directly responsible for the study of all such reports,decided to (making改成make) his findings known.(They改成He) wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained (去掉for) quite naturally by aircraft movements.(Follow改成Following) this explanation,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sighting,(because改成although) the rate remained above the previous level.