帮我看看我的英文自我介绍有没有语法错误 再看看那里还需要修改

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帮我看看我的英文自我介绍有没有语法错误 再看看那里还需要修改
英文：Do you recognize a girl who is out-going hard-working confident and modest named ZhangMengTing?She is interested in singing songs and drawing pictures. She is harding-working and kindess.Of course she also have many shortcomings
.even though her achievements are not the best but she really is most diligent.So she gets along well with her classmates.If you feel regreting to not recognize this girl,don't to be disappointed.Because I'm that girl,a 15-year-ord girl .Do you like me?
译文：你认识一个叫张梦婷的外向 努力 自信 谦虚的女孩吗?她对唱歌和画画感兴趣.她努力而且和善,当然他也有很多缺点.虽然她的成绩不是最好的,但是她却真的是最勤奋的.所以她和她的同学相处的很好.如果你后悔没有认识这个女孩,请不要失望,因为我就是那个女孩,一个15岁在……（哪个学校哪个班上学）的女孩.你喜欢我吗?

答案

Do you know a girl names zhang Meng Ting who is modest and self-confident as well as strong-minded? She is interested in singing songs and drawing pictures.
你的句子表达很一般,比较累赘.语法存在明显的错误.
shortcomings 一般不用这个词,用weakness
even though her achievements are not the best but she really is most diligent.
去掉but.
If you feel regreting to not recognize this girl,don't to be disappointed.这句话明显错误,改成,If you feel failing to recognize(know) this girl,don't to be disappointed.