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1现在国内有不少人喜欢过西方的节日
2.谈谈产生这种现象的原因是
3. 这种现象可能带来的影响
The Celebration of Western Festivals
Nowadays,more and more Chinese youngsters have a fever for the Western Fevitals. For an instance,boys will buy flowers and chocolate to their girlfriends at Valentine's Day,but do nothing when Lantern Festival.
What cause this phenomenon,maybe the following reasons can answer it.Firstly,the youngsters are influented by the western media nowadays,which make them think that the western festivals are much more interesting than the Chinese Festivals.Secondly,as the western festivals express that sending presents to friends and relatives is important,the public will think highly of them for they can stimulus the economy.
Through it can develop the economy,but our festivas will despair gradually as their place will be replaced by the western festivals.So we must advocate celebrating our festivals immediately.We must believe that our Chinese festival also can accelerate the consumption here.What's more,the media plays an important role in developing public's interesing of Chinese festivals.

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Generally speaking, it is a great effort. Good job man.Correction1)"have a fever for" Do not use that, even "be wild about" is better than "fever"2)for instance 3)boys buy flowers... omit "will"4)buy ...