帮我看看这段英文文字有没有错误吧,

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帮我看看这段英文文字有没有错误吧,
Yukin is a very kind and beautiful girl.She has grown up with her friends,Luga and Milla.Luga is a a nice people that everyone loved him.Of couse,Yukin had a secret crush on Luga.But Luga and Milla were looking at each other that Yukin didn't know.
Two month after,on Luga’s birthday ,Yukin told him her feeling.At that time Luga didn't show the relationship between he and Milla and didn't refuse Yukin’s feelings.He knows Yunki is a thin-skinned girl and he didn't want to hunt her heart.But after a while,Luga realised that the exist of Yukin will broke the relationship between he and Milla.So one day,he took Yukin out and they never connect.Luga killed Yukin by a knife (Poke hurt her heart)Yukin passed away.But she cannot die,she wanna suvive.
One year later,Luga and Milla have married.But their happy life end up with the coming of short hair girl.

答案

Yukin is a very kind and beautiful girl.She has grown up with her friends,Luga and Milla.Luga is a a nice people that everyone loved him.Of couse,Yukin had a secret crush on Luga.But Luga and Milla were looking at each other that Yukin didn't know.
Two month --later--,on Luga's birthday ,Yukin told him her feeling.At that time Luga didn't show the relationship --with-- Milla and didn't refuse Yukin’s feelings.He knows Yunki is a thin-skinned girl and he didn't want to --hurt-- her heart.But after a while,Luga realised that the exist of Yukin will broke the relationship --with-- Milla.So one day,he took Yukin out and they never connect.Luga killed Yukin by a knife and Yukin passed away.But she cannot die,she wanna suvive.
One year later,Luga and Milla have married.But their happy life end up with the coming of short hair girl.