谁能帮我看一下我写的这篇雅思作文能有几分?

题目

谁能帮我看一下我写的这篇雅思作文能有几分?
The university should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give students more practical training. Do you agree or disagree?
　　In modern society, more and more people think that the university should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give students more practical training. However there’s also a lot of people do not agree with them. In my opinion, the university provide student more practical training is very necessary.
　　First, when people come to university, most of them is more than 18 years old, so they have ability to teach-self. That means student can learn theoretical knowledge mainly by self-teaching rather than by lessons.
　　Second, in modern society, the practical ability is becoming more and more important. But in school, students rarely have chance to practice themselves. The most of their life is compare with lots of books rather than practical training. Therefore when graduating from university, many students find t

答案

说实话,当时给你的分还是比较合理的.因为很多基本知识点错误.