帮我看一下这篇初一的英语作文有什么问题

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帮我看一下这篇初一的英语作文有什么问题
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This year,at the August 9th,the No.8 typhoon, Molake was landing at Xiapu,Fujian.At the August 10th to 11th ,Molake arrived Zhejiang.The weather was pouring and windy,but the day I went to the English lesson the same as usual.At the 8:00 Am,I went to the Hangzhou Children’s Palace.I walked to the bus stop first.When I waited the bus,a car drived quickly near me,and my clothes was wet.

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This year,in August 9th,the No.8 typhoon,Molake was landing at Xiapu,Fujian.In August 10th till 11th ,Molake was arrived Zhejiang.Although the weather was cold with heavy rain pouring down from the sk...