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托福独立写作帮忙打个分谢谢!
是否国货价格上涨还是要坚持买国货
Protecting our country is a perpetual topic in our times.Buying commodities made in our country is a important and imperative part of the process that protects our country.In the past decades,most people should spontaneously buy things cheaper wherever they are made,since the undeveloped and low science and technology.But today,as the gradually raised living standards,there is a trend that people progressively buy things in their own country,even the price is higher than same thing made somewhere else.Therefore it is a unavoidable and fierce debate on it.
It is undeniable that people should buy things made in our country is correct.When we buy things that are made in our country,our country economy will bulge progressively,no matter what the price is.So this action is a direct and obvious way to protect our country.If the price is low,most people will achieve it more easily and preferable.After all the notion that protecting our country is filled with our every native.
But,I doubt that even the price is higher than same things made somewhere else,we also should buy the things that made in our country for every individual.Every individual has his or her own limitation so that we can't ask everyone to buy things made in our country higher even it is a way that protecting our country economy.If the quality of the things is the same and the price is lower than that made in our country,to some not rich people,it can save their money that is hard to get for them.To some extent,even if buying price higher things absolutely is a way to protect our country economy,as a result,it may bring some individuals to get into trouble that make his or her life difficult.Is it wonder that our government want to see?The answer is admittablely negative.
Judging from above evidence,I can hardly agree that people should buy things made in their own country,even the price is higher than same things made somewhere else.It depends on the position and the wealthy that every person has.The high position and richer individual should make it as possible as they can,but ordinary people don't need to achieve it over his or her ability.

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Protecting our country is a perpetual topic in our times.Buying commodities made in our country is a（an） important and imperative part of the process that protects our country.In the past decades,（...