英语 有哪位朋友能帮忙看下这段话,不知道有没有用词上的错误

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英语 有哪位朋友能帮忙看下这段话,不知道有没有用词上的错误
It's my hometown with my family and friends,who assist me through a difficulty,provide me with guidance and support.Wherever I will live in ,whatever I will be ,it's my best place to live in.
我想表达“无论我今后成为什么样的人”用 whatever I will be 是否正确?

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修改如下：It's my hometown with my family and friends,who assist me when I'm in difficulty and provide me with guidance and support.Wherever I will live or whatever I will become,it's my best place to...