请指出一段英文信的错误之处(包括格式)

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请指出一段英文信的错误之处(包括格式)
Department of Philosophy
Nanjing University
Nanjing 210093
P.R.China
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April 3,2008
Professor Bush.Clinton,Editor
The Johns Hopkins University Press
701 W.40th St.,Suite 275
Baltimore,Maryland 21211
U.S.A
Dear Prof.Bush:
I am an associate professor of Nanjing University,I’m now submitting a paper titled How to do Things with Texts which was delivered at the “International Symposium on Literary Criticism” hold at Oxford University in December 8-9,2007.I hope it is acceptable to your prestigious Journal Philosophy and Literature.
BTW,I cited something from the book listed in the references of your paper which published in Journal of Contemporary Philosophy (Vol.19,2006).The book is listed as follow:"Bush.Johnson,et al.The Doctrine of Virtue.New York:Macmillan,2004." Do you happen to know any information about Prof.Bush and Professor Johnson?I am appreciated if you could give me a list of the

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Dear Prof. Bush:I am an associate professor of Nanjing University. (用句号来断句,不是逗号“,”） I’m now submitting a paper titled “How to do Things with Texts”（去掉which was） delivered at the In...