个人英文简历,希望指正

题目

个人英文简历,希望指正
My name is xx .I graduated from xx and majored International Economics and Trade .In school period I passed the Band four and Band six College English Exams,National Computer Bank Examination Certificate (VFP 2),and have the primary level about Japanese.
Four year university's studies have formed my rigorous study manner,Strict thinking mode ,and has raised the good study custom,two times obtains scholarship.
In addition,I with my Schoolmate organized activities many times successfully,obtaining choolmate's approval and teacher's high praise.I believed I can certainly coordinate each kind of relations,deal with the issue in the good routine work .
I will do my best to work and get over every difficulty,contribute a strength for the development of your company .
我叫XX，毕业于XX国际经济与贸易系。在校期间我顺利的通过了大学英语
的四、六级考试，计算机VFP二级考试，辅修了日语专业获得初级水平。四年大学的学习形成了我严谨的学习态度、严密的思维方式，培养了良好的学习习惯，并且两次获得学习优秀奖学金。
除此之外，我成功地组织及参加了多次班集体校内外活动，工作得到同学的认可与老师的好评，我所在的班级多次被评为"优秀班集体"。我相信有了这些工作经历，我一定能够协调各种关系、处理好日常工作中遇到的问题。
我将倾我所能，不断学习我所不能，为贵公司的发展贡献一份力量，实现奉献社会，回报国家的愿望。

答案

My name is xx .I graduated from xx and majored 【in】 International Economics and Trade.During college period,I have passed CET-4(College English Test Band 4) and CET-6 in succession and acquired Nati...