帮我改改英语作文 挑错就行
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帮我改改英语作文 挑错就行
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My dear winter vacation!
To tell you the truth,I’m really fed up with the life full of homework!As for study,I have no option but to agree.the holiday arrived At last!Therefor,I’m going to take a trip to Chengde Mountain Resort.
That is a place of historic interest,Qianlong always went there to spend the summer.The common people were not allowed to go there at that time,but now,things are different!
As an emperor,he has to do so much things,but he also has time to relax,his mother will not ask him to study or work!We have less responsbility than him,we are younger than him,so,why not give us the right to enjoy ourselves?That can not change by me,I’m not the emperor after all.
Close my eyes now,I wish,my trip will be fantastic.
My trip
I’m in Chengde now.
I had just came back from chengde mountain resort.
Actually,this was a developing city.All the houses were renovated,I believed that this city would covered with
答案
Therefor后面丢个E,
As an emperor,he has to do so much things,but he also has time to relax,his mother will not ask him to study or work这里应该用过去时.
My trip这部分时态有点乱,既然后面都是在叙述过去的事,第一句话也应用过去时.
Do chores 这部分也是这样.But I have no option but to start to work.这句应该用过去时.
The cinema 这部分整个第二段都是叙述过去的电影院吧?既然下面用现成时说它不再神秘,这段显然是过去的,该用过去时.
最后那句该用现在完成时.
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整体来说表达不错的,唯一要注意的是时态.你再仔细斟酌一下.
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