I think it is not only his innate talent but also his hard working made him so successful.

题目

I think it is not only his innate talent but also his hard working made him so successful.
这句话的语法正确吗?

答案

不对,你用了强调句,后面要有that：
it is not only his talent but also his hard working that make him succeed.而且强调的部分要和后面的时态保持一致.