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大家看看我的文章有没有错误好吗
Dear Staff,
I’m writing with regret to tell you that Li Ming,a member of the software development department,has been diagnosed with cancer.Unfortunately,his illness is not covered by the medical insurance.I think we have the obligation to give him some financial supports in his hard time.If you are willing to help,please contact me in my office.
Yours sincerely
Greg Cai

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注意“illness"不被”cover",是指“cost of medication for the illness"吧?你说的不是病,而是钱,注意不要省略."in his hard time"比较僵硬,用”give him some financial support at such difficult times."最后一句...