帮我看一下这篇关于母亲的初中英语作文有什么错误

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帮我看一下这篇关于母亲的初中英语作文有什么错误
My mother has been doing a lot of things for me.she is one of the most importance humans in my heart.she is forty years old,and she is a worker.My mother is every beautiful.She used to have short hair.Now,she has straight and long hair .My mother can cook delicious food .My mother's hobby watching soap operas ,and we watch soap opreas every day.But I think they are very boring!My mother does breakfast for me every day.She has to get up early .and she is every care about my study.She often help me to study.She is very strict!My mother do lots of things for me.but I never do anythings for her.I think I'm very lazy So I make a decision.I am going to help my mother to do the dishes .I will do chores everyday.I will study hard .finally,I only want to say;" Mom,I love you "

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每句都认真看了,我从语法和语言习惯两个方面给你进行了修改,希望及时采纳.My mother has been doing a lot of things for me不符合语言逻辑,改为过去式即可.most importance humans改为most important people in my ...