麻烦高手帮我看下翻译有没有语法错误.急,在线等!

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麻烦高手帮我看下翻译有没有语法错误.急,在线等!
关于成绩单翻译成英文的事,我已经问过程丽,她现在在忙,让我告诉你,第一年的成绩单是由XX大学的胡琛老师翻译的,去年的成绩单我们发给你们的是也中文的,并且学校只提供中文的成绩单.
我的翻译：About Transcripts translate into English, I have asked Cheng Li, she is busy now, she let me tell you, the first year transcripts translation into English was by Hu Chen who is XX University’s teacher, last year we sent you the transcripts also was in Chinese. And the school only provides our Chinese transcripts.
麻烦帮忙看下有什么错误,并且帮忙改正,谢谢各位!

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I have asked Cheng Li about the translation of the transcripts into English. She is busy now, she asked me to tell you that the transcripts of the the first year was translated into English by Mr. Hu Chen, who is a teacher from XX University, and the transcripts we sent you last year were also in Chinese, because the school provides Chinese transcripts only.