求英语帝翻译一段话,论文用,尽量严谨

题目

求英语帝翻译一段话,论文用,尽量严谨
对我国传统零售业在营销策略进行分析,指出在营销过程中所存在的落后观念,探究国内营销方式与沃尔玛绿色营销方式的差距,总结其成功经验,并用于指导国内同行发展竞争,面对加入WTO以来零售业日益开放,竞争加剧的趋势,中国企业的应对策略.
[关键词]绿色营销、成功经验、启示
在线等
请不要用在线翻译，翻译出来语法错误很多啊啊啊啊

答案

The paper makes an analysis on the droditional retail industries of the marketing strategy in our country,points out the subsistent unenlightened sense during the course of marketing,makes a thorough inquiry the gap between the domestic marketing mode and Walmart’s green marketing mode and sums up Walmart’s successful experience to guide the domestic same trades to develop the market competition.Facing the retail industries’s increasingly opening to the outside world since joining WTO and ungovernable competition,this paper puts forward a strategy to answer them.
Key words:green marketing,successful experience,enlightenment
原文后面的句子不知所指,只好揣摩翻译了.