英语翻译

题目

英语翻译
城市看来像光的海洋．
The city lights look like a sea of the light.
晚上的光比白天的亮．
The lights in the evening are brighter than the lights in the morning.

答案

第一句话是把城市比作光的海洋,不是把城市的灯比做海洋,所以就the city looks like a sea of lights.比较好.
至于第二句,翻译要对称,所以既然用了in the evening,后面最好就用in the day-time.至于原句中than后面的the lights可以用that替换,这样显得句子更加整洁,而且精练.所以第二句改写为the light in the evening is brighter than that in the day-time.