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Directions：For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?You should write at least 120 words folllowing the outline given below.
1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立,父母应该……
How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
Let You Child To Flying
In nowdays,prepared the all thing and made a decide for children is over parents.The activities beyond parents should do result in children lack of the decide for themselves.
In order to make children to be independent,parents should try to let they alone and much think of what they think.Ask what they want and tell children to working hard for it in your guide.
Parents are the special teacher in child life but not themselves.Everyone have a broad sky in life and can flying in the sky.Independent should be in child flying travel.
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let your child fly
in nowadays, children is well prepared and deprived of their right to make a dicision of their own future. the activities way beyond the parents duty could result in children's lack of capability to make dicision of their own,
in order to make chilren to be independent, parents should try to leave them alone and take their children's thought more seriously. ask what do they want and tell the children to work hard for it under your instruction and supervision.
parents are the special teacher in children's life instead of themselves, everyone are entitled to a broad sky to fly freely in their life and independence should be the key element in children's fly journey