雅思作文修改及评分
题目
雅思作文修改及评分
The government should pay for people's education and health care.To what ectent do you agree or disagree?
正文:
Education and
health are high on the government’s agenda.Some people hold the view that the
government should pay for citizen’s education and health care.I am partly for
it.
There are three
main reasons.Firstly,a large of proportion of government revenue comes of
taxes paid by citizens.Therefore each taxpayer has the right to make free
health and education provided by state.Secondly,there must be many people who
can not afford the education and health care in every country.Aiming to let
every individual have the same right to be alive,the government should relieve
the education and health burden of underprivileged,which can help government
to safeguard social stability.Thirdly,international competition is
increasingly fierce in economy field today.People’s education and health level
is a significant factor affecting the economy development.By providing free
education an health care,the government can promote the competitiveness of a
country’s workforce.
However,the
government should not pay all the education and health care,because the
limited government receipts should be paid in many other fields,i.e.economy,
technology,infrastructure,national defense and the same as.So citizens
should take a part of the responsibility of their own education and health
care.Meanwhile,the government should keep a reasonable balance between the
citizens’ education and health care need and other financial expenditure.
In a word,the
government should provide free education and health care for the poor people
and put up a large part of those for the other.And the government should also implement
a proper welfare system to reduce the social unrest.
答案
举一反三
我想写一篇关于奥巴马的演讲的文章,写哪一篇好呢?为什么好
最新试题
- .Lucy was born __the night of May 12,1984.
- 辛弃疾的词有哪些!
- 苦夏 冯骥才 阅读题
- 应用题:甲数的小数点向右一动,等于乙数,甲数与乙数相差0.99,甲数是几?
- 一百分之一+一百分之二+一百分之三.+一百分之九十九=?
- The weatherin china is very d from that in England
- 王明同学在电脑中设置了一个有理数的运算程序
- A,B两市相距600km,汽车从A开往B,行驶速度为80km/h (1)以汽车开出时间t(h)为自变量,写出汽车离B市距
- 已知向量a=(3,4),向量b=(2,-1),a+xb与a-b垂直时,求x的值
- 有哪位知道液碱的主要成分有哪些?如何测定液碱主要成分的百分含量?
热门考点
- 为什么小苏打与白醋混合会产生二氧化碳
- 方程(x+1)x=600怎么解
- 《事物的正确答案不止一个》概括主要内容
- 设a>b>0,A是a,b的等差中项,G是a,b的等比中项,(G>0)且A=2G,则a/b等于
- the,his,boy,brother,black,is,in.(连词成句)
- 英语翻译
- 13.下列各组词语中,没有错别字的一组是【 】
- The station is about five kilometers______ his home.A far Baway Cfrom Dfar from
- 一对步兵以5.4千米|小时的速度前进,通讯员从队尾骑马到队头传令后,立刻返回队尾,总共用了10分钟,如果
- Stop__,and get to work.A.talking B.to talk 选什么?