大家看看我这封英语信的语法对不对?

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大家看看我这封英语信的语法对不对?
Because i made some mistake yesterday,so i requested you to confirm your shipping agent,But atually we had booking cargo space by ROCKWOOD FORWARDER as usual on 6 April 2001.You can rest assured.

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Because i made some mistake yesterday--- i requested you to confirm your shipping agent( 表明此句是你犯的错误）.Actually we did book cargo space with ROCKWOOD FORWARDER as usual on 6 April 2001.You can rest assured.这样会好一点,当然你原文也非常正确了