这是我作的一些英文句子,怎么可以改善他?

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这是我作的一些英文句子,怎么可以改善他?
Situation (describing data):
Statistical data shown by Chapter One(an independent online bookshop),pointed out that people buying fiction & non-fiction books had decreased sharply from 55% in 2010 to 18% in 2012.On the other hand,e-books are used by more and more people,with profits percentage rocketed instantaneously.Profits from e-book business had increased 6 times between 2010 and 2012.
Problem (Problem statement):
As e-book reading may become trendy in future,printed book may be abandoned,even eradicated,and most of typographers will close down in the end.
Solution (Solution statement):
One of the best ways to stop the tragedy is to rise some promotion to emphasize the printed book has more superior rather than e-books.
Evaluation of the Effectiveness of the Solution:
Normally,after recording people the advantage of reading printed book,the profit typographers can make will be increased.
Conclusion:
The extinction of pri

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Situation (describing data): Statistical data shown in Chapter One(an independent online bookshop), pointed out that people buying fiction & non-fiction books had decreased sharply from 55% in 201...