英语改错题 一共有十个错误 第一行跟第二行是对的

题目

英语改错题 一共有十个错误 第一行跟第二行是对的
I was walking along the main shopping belt when I bumped into an old
acquaintance.He remark that I had put on some weight since the last time
he saw me.I was trying to figure up how that had happened because I am usually
quite disciplined in keeping fit.I workout at the gymnasium three time a week
and complement that with either aerobic exercises or jogging.Than one day I
stumbled upon this article that said that balmy indoor temperatures during
winter may contribute to gradual weight gained.That and poor diet due to the
feasting and merrymaking during the Christmas season,along with the lack of
exercise,especially during festive seasons,are the main drivers behind these
temporary obesity of mine.Well,it looks like I may have to watch my diet to
ensure that I maintain my figures so as to fit into the clothes I bought during the
festive sales period.
错了。第一行跟最后一行是对的

答案

第二行------remakdThen第六行------后一个that去掉第七行------把and去掉,直接以That 引导主语从句第八行------去掉these,drives behind.是...的原因/真凶第九行------watch后面加out,watch out,小心第十行------fi...