英语翻译

题目

英语翻译
I have a dream that I am always young.Then I will have enough energy to do everything whenever I want.Moreover,I don't have to worry about old age,I even can't take care of yourself.I know that my dream will not come true.However,I am very glad when I was young.So I will treasure my time,enjoy my life and try my best to do everything.
我的梦想
我有一个梦想就是我永远年轻,然后我就会有足够的精力去做我想做的事情,而且,我就不会因年老无法照顾自己而忧虑.我深知我的梦想不会实现.然而,我很幸运,现在我很年轻.因此,我一定要珍惜青春好时光,享受生活,并且尽最大努力把每件事情做好.

答案

I don't have to worry about old age, I even can't take care of yourself. 改为：I don't have to worry that I can't take care of myself because of old age.
I am very glad （高兴）when I was young. 改为 I am very lucky(幸运的)that now I am quite young.