我写了一篇英语的作文 请修改下谢谢

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我写了一篇英语的作文 请修改下谢谢
New Year’s day is coming.Everyone has lots of New year’s resolutions.I asked my friends about their New Year’s resolutions.Lucy is a good student.She always gets good grades at school.But she wants to do better in Chinese.She is going to take Chinese lessons every Sunday.She is going to be a reporter when she grows up.She is a little bit heavy.So she will eat more vegetables and do more exercise to keep fit.Vicky is a smart girl.She does well in English.Next year,she plans to learn a foreign lauguage.She is going to have Fench classes every month.She is good at playing the piano,too.She really love music and she is going to learn the guitar.I hope that their dreams come true.

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Great!your composition is excellent,with just a few mistakes:She is a little bit heavy.She is a little bit overweight.Next year,she plans to learn a foreign lauguage.She plans to learn a foreign langu...