英文 求改正错误

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英文 求改正错误
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Here’s the weather forecast of China.We’ll divide the country into four.
We’ll begin with the North-East.In the morning it is minus 10 degrees maybe it will snow.In the afternoon it will be cloudy and you can expect sunshine.In Changchun It will be sunny and there’re clouds,the temperature is minus 4.I think you will see the sun the whole day.
In North-Central it’ll be minus 1 and there’ll be a little shower.In South-Central There might be some rain and it’ll be 21.
In the West it’ll be Sunny,in Urumqi minus 4 and in Lhasa plus 15.
In the South-East it’ll be warm.In Hongkong it’ll be higher than yesterday around 33 degrees I don’t think you’ll see much off the sun because it’s cloudy.In Shanghai you don’t have to wait for the sun.It’ll be cloudy but the temperature is 27.

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这是给你修给好的版本.Here’s the weather forecast of China.We’ll divide the country into four regions.We’ll begin with the North-East region.In the morning it is minus 10 degrees with the possibilit...