这段英语文字有没有语法或单词方面的错误

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这段英语文字有没有语法或单词方面的错误
A Day to Remember
It was Monday of April last year.My daughter was born in Shanghai East Hospital.That day was a memorable day for me.
You will find the passage somewhere in the Bible:“I will increase your troubles in pregnancy and pain in giving birth”.I know the travail of giving birth to a child.After hours' labor pains,I labored a girl.I wept tears when I heard a loud cry of my baby.My husband said to me:“You are working hard,honey!Thank you!” He told me that my baby was very lovely and healthy.I feel very happy because I became mother in that day.

答案

1.I wept tears when I ...中的wept有流泪的意思了.tears 删去
2.最后in that day把in删去