帮我看看这段英文有没有语病和用词不当,英语

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帮我看看这段英文有没有语病和用词不当,英语
we can see the different values of life that people have by this a few characters.They faced death unflinchingly and they all were great.They thought there was more important things than their own life and we believe that a full and substantial life can not be without this.

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我觉得应该改为we can see the different values of life that people have this by a few characters.They face death unflinchingly and them all were great.They thought there was more important things than ...