谁帮我改一下这片日记.

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谁帮我改一下这片日记.
live very happily today!in the morning,it is very fine!then i climb the mountain with family,the air on the mountain is very fresh,the flowers plants and trees on the mountain all seem extremely beautiful.in the afternoon,i go to friends home to play,the friend entertains me warmly,show me a lot of books of his ,has listened to his cd for me ,then also ask me to eat a sumptuous dinner.coming back home in the evening,family and i sat and watched tv together,we are returning and eating the fruit while chatting,the whole family is happy and harmonious!译文：今天我过得非常开心!早上,天气非常好!于是我和家人一起去登山,山上的空气非常清新,山上的花草树木都显得格外美丽.下午,我去了朋友家玩,朋友热情地招待我,给我看了他的很多书,给我听了他的cd,然后还请我吃了一顿丰盛的晚餐.晚上回到家,我与家人坐在一起看电视,我们还一边聊天一边吃着水果,全家其乐融!

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中式作文啊,对于初一同学,通篇看起来还可以的