英语达人帮我修改下英语作文啊`谢谢!

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英语达人帮我修改下英语作文啊`谢谢!
Money
People often say money is all-powerful.But it's not the case at all.Many things in our daily life to be bought with money,
but there are still many other things that cannot be bought with money.
For example,knowledge and time cannot be bought with money.There are only twenty-four hours in a day.It is very fair to
everyone ,a day can't be shortened or lengthened whatever the cost is.Knowledge cannot be bought with moner ,either.知识的获得只
靠自己的艰苦努力,因此不要以为金钱是万能的（注：这句不会写,麻烦在修改时候顺便帮我写一下这句）.

答案

But it's not the case at all---But it's not often the cases.
Only by working hard can knowledge be gained,so it's wrong to consider money is everything.