谁来帮我检查一下这段英文有没有错?

题目

谁来帮我检查一下这段英文有没有错?
Time passes in a hurry,a short winter holiday has become a part of my
memory.Many things happened during my holiday,and the most unforgettable
things is reading this piece of news on the internet.
In New York,some Japanese feeding a kitten to promote bone softening chemical drugs
They put these cats into various shapes of the bottles to made bonsai cat.
The cats that are put into the bottle can’t move and eat anything.They can only get nutrients
by a plastic pipe.
These cats won’t be able to move at all even if they are out of the bottle.
When we are criticizing Japanese ,we should know what we did on animals
as human beings.
We are all crule to animals,not only Japanese put animals into pain and danger by their own interests.
After reading this piece of news,after spending this winter holiday,I know the importance of protecting animals.

答案

没有错啊