这篇雅思作文大概多少分?

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这篇雅思作文大概多少分?
I think museums refer to the place where we
can study and learn local culture and history.Today our cultural identify is
heavily influenced by globalization.As far as I concerned,the most important
target of museums is attracting more local inhabitants.Free tickets’
advantages outweigh disadvantages.
Personally,I think that cultural identify
should be preserved to some extent.Free admission for local history or art
museums is a necessary method to attract more people.For instance,western
cultures are popular in China,especially in students.However,few of them
interest in traditional culture such as calligraphy which represents our
particular art.Consequently,they are more likely to participate in a western
singer’s performance rather than visit a local museum.
Furthermore,the museums are freely opened
to local individuals since individual pays tax.It is general believe that the
original function of museums is to s

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