跪寻英语强人.帮忙看看小弟这短文语法错没.

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跪寻英语强人.帮忙看看小弟这短文语法错没.
my summer holiday
Today,I'm going to the TONGXIANG .It's beautiful,i like it.Here is cold,so l'm putting on my clothes.After,i'm feeling warm.For lunch,i'm eating rice,fish,vegetables and soup.I think what food is delicious.Because l like eating sweet.My parents think what people are good to them.I think so.Yuck!I'm not feeling well,i have a sore throut.I think i have a cold...
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my summer holiday
Today,(I'm going to) I arrived in (the) TONGXIANG(这个TONGXIANG是什么?地名?) .The city is（It's如果TONGXIANG是地名就这么改） beautiful,I like it.
Tt（Here） was（is） cold today,so I wore（l'm putting on）my coat （my clothes clothes- -你也不可能是裸奔去的啊）.So,（After,）I did not feel cold today( i'm feeling warm).For lunch,I (i'm) had(eating )rice,fish,vegetables and soup.I think the(what 为啥用what?) food is delicious.（Because l like eating sweet.孩子.米饭