在线帮忙修改英语演讲稿 主题是假如我是我们系的主任,在一次庆功派对上赞扬我们英语辩论队的队员和辅导

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在线帮忙修改英语演讲稿 主题是假如我是我们系的主任,在一次庆功派对上赞扬我们英语辩论队的队员和辅导
Ladies and gentlemen,
May I have your attention ,please.It's a happy moment for us to get together to celebrate our winning at “the Hope Cup Debate Contest”.
As we all know ,the Hope Cup Debate Contest is a campus-wide competition.Hundreds of English debate teams from different departments in our school have participated in it .Even though its hard to get prizes in this event,our team has ranked the first place,So,cheers for us.We are the champion!
Here .I'd like to take a moment to offer my sincere thanks to all of you.For nearly 3 months ,our team members have spared no effort to prepare for the contest .Once they have free time,they will gather to discuss varieties of topics.Meanwhile ,our professors have provided extraordinary guidance in support of out team members.Thanks my dear teammates.
During the process of the contest,our defenders have shown the character of our physics department--quick reaction and strict logical thinking.It’s our first defender who threw light upon our viewpoint.It's our second and third defenders who caught the rival's careless mistakes .It's our last defender who gave an impressing conclusion.It's our instructors who accompanied us all along.
So,thanks everybody,You deserve the first prize!
This is a big day for us ,and I look forward you to continuing to work hard and get more progress!Let’s enjoy our celebration party.
我觉得我的结尾不够好,而且感觉不够富有激情.希望能够得到帮助

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首先应该有句问候语吧.Good morning,Good afternoon,Good evening,这些都是基本的开场白 要有的.