求高手点评,能得几分啊?雅思作文
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求高手点评,能得几分啊?雅思作文
People who move to a new country should accept the new culture as their own.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is quite common that modern people go abroad to study,work or do business.What is meant by this is that people who move to a foreign country will be confronted with more troubles in the further because of the cultural diversity.Therefore,those who will be in the new countries for a long time should adapt to the local culture as soon as possible.
Obviously,it is certainly to bring advantages to migrators to accept the new culture early.We have observed that people who live in the foreign style perform better in their fields.That is,cultural difference cannot place barriers for those who could adapt to the new life quickly.besides,people are provided more opportunities to learn about the local culture when they live in the local style.They should think by the local thinking style and work by the local working style,which are regarded as the
答案
内容完整,观点鲜明.
单词复杂,句型多样.
结构符合标准.
根据经验至少7分.
建议:第2段观点略多,使具体分析略少.
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