帮我检查一下文章(英文)
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帮我检查一下文章(英文)
我有一篇文章,希望大家帮我找错,不管什么错都要找,水平不高,见笑了.
My Olympic Dream
I think 2008 Beijing Olympic Games will be very good in the future.So,I have an Olympic dream:I want to be a volunteer of 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.
As everyone knows,Olympic is the most important games around the world.So,this games is more important for China.So,I must learn English well.
Long long ago,in my childhood.I have hoped I can contribution to 2008.And I can realize my dream.I was very exciting and happy.If I’m a volunteer,I will be better than the others volunteers that I sure.So I will be an ordinary and great volunteer.If I can do those things,how happy I am!
2008 Beijing Olympic Games,You need me,I need you,too!
答案
I have an Olympic dream about the coming 2008 Olympic games which I have been longing for:I want to be a volunteer of it.
Olympic is the most important sports meeting around the world.And the next one to be hold in China will undoubtedly provide Chinese an opportunity to show the traditional culture and strong power in sports and all other aspects.It is the great chance to learn,to show and to develop.
I have hungered for a chance to contribute for the great meeting.I hope I can fulfill my long dream.I will work with great excitement,happiness and efforts if I would be allowed to be an volunteer luckily.
2008 Beijing Olympic Games!You need me,and I need you!
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