英语语法..本人是小白..

题目

英语语法..本人是小白..
I want to be a photographer.I love photography,I think that photography is very interesting.I love to shoot the dawn,sunset,rivers,and beautiful scenery.I really enjoyed taking pictures,because it help me record that I like and like my people and things
.本人乱写的.不知道哪里有错误

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I want to be a photographer.没错I love photography,I think that photography is very interesting.没有连词的情况下,一句只有一个主语和谓语,逗号改句号I love to shoot the dawn,sunset,rivers,and beautiful scenery.没错I really enjoyed taking pictures,because it help me record that I like and like my people and things动词错了,enjoy就行,helps,that不能引导宾语从句,意思也重复了,直接改成 because it helps me record my favourite people and things.