逐句分析的追加5-10分,求帮修改作文,写错语法错误需要改正的地方,15分满分能打几分?.大学四级

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逐句分析的追加5-10分,求帮修改作文,写错语法错误需要改正的地方,15分满分能打几分?.大学四级
单身家庭十分普遍,对孩子产生的不良影响,如何解决单身家庭孩子面临的问题.
in recent years ,single parent family become more and more general in society.why so many children become single parent children?because one of their parents had died or their parents had divorced.
single parent family brings many negetive effects to children.above all ,they lose half of the love from parents .besides,they may feel unbalance and easy to get angry.what is more ,without the love and care from both parents ,they may easily develop some bad habits.
single parent children have become a problem we have to face.as far as I concerned,firstly,society should pay more attention to single parent children.in addition ,parent should spent more time to take care of their children ,both of the physical and mentally development.all in all ,as their friends or classmates ,we can't look down upon them ,when they face some problems on study or in daily life ,we should give a hand to them actively

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1.第一段：(1) why so many children become single parent children?改为why so many children become single-parent children?(2)because one of their parents had died or their parents had divorced.改为becau...