请高人帮忙修改英语作文

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请高人帮忙修改英语作文
一些学生进入大学后就放松了学习,然而学习是没有止境的,论证上述观点
There is no end to learning
With the expansion of college admission,a growing number lf college students went into college.At the same time,a phenomenon that students in college are gradually stop learning arouse widely public attention.Certainly,their behavioris badly wrong.
For ine thing,although we havr come to college,our status are still students.We should learn more knowlege to prepare for our future job hunting.For another,as an old saying goes,it's never too late to learn.Even if we do have a job,there are still so many things we should learn.Only with a wealth of knowlege,can our speak be more effective .Last but not least,it's no wonder that those who have more knowlege and ability are more likely to be admired by others.Because knowlege build a bridge between those who are in same majors,thus with more knoalege,good relationship could be developed .
Providing the reasons above,I hold the belief that students in campus couldi't waste their study

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