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最好8级水平
帮我改一下哈 语法错误和拼写错误
After a well-rounded study,I know that the CGA course offered by ZUEL is a program between ZUEL and the Certified General Accountants Association of Canada.It mainly has 3 goals.The first one is to acquire a master degree of the ZUEL.After that,students taking the CGA course will try to get a CGA professional certificate.The final goal of the course is to get a MBA degree in Canada.
It is known that a good command of English is significant if one wants to pursue the CGA.I believe my English is outstanding and I have been taking pride in it.However,I played below par in the NCEE,getting relatively low mark.So I hope the mark of the NCEE isn’t the main criterion to select students that can pursue the CGA.
If I can take the course,I will definitely do my best to become the most excellent one,preparing to try out for CGA.I know sense of responsibility and carefulness is significant,since members of CGA may deal with large amounts of money everyday,th

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I know sense of responsibility and carefulness is significant建议改成I know the importance of responsibility and carefulnessthey must take on responsibilities and be careful建议删掉,因为前面已经提到过...