英语短文改错要说哪错了 还有理由

题目

英语短文改错要说哪错了 还有理由
I had been in London for two years .When the time I was studying there ,my strong wish was to go back home instead of stay in the city I didn't know well .So when the day came for my leaving .I had a strange feeling and my mind were full of beautiful things in London-the tall trees around my house ,the clean streets ,the school library and so on .I was at the first time not sure whether I real wish to go .But my parents ere quite old and I might have no time to see them again if I gave in this plan .At the airport ,most of my teachers and friends came to see me to off .Everyone took hands with me and said goodbye to me .Their eyes were full with tears and I knew they were sad ,too

答案

When the time I was studying there→When I was studying there 或 During the time I was studying there
instead of stay→ instead of staying
So when the day came→ However,/But when the day came 这里明显是转折意味,不能用表结果的连词so
my mind were full of→ was
whether I real wish to go→ really
my parents ere quite old...if I gave in this plan→ were（个人估计这个是打错了）,gave up
see me to off→ see me off
took hands with me→ shook hands
were full with tears→ were full of /were filled with