我的英文简历,帮忙检查一下有没有错误,能美化更好,

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我的英文简历,帮忙检查一下有没有错误,能美化更好,
Self Evaluation:
I am confident,optimistic and responsible,I have high sense of team spirit and also with strong ability in management.
Education:
I will graduate from Qingdao University in July of the next year,and studied four-year commercial and trade course.Besides,I have studied one year of German and read many books.
Work Experience:
2007/03 Social Information Company
My position is Market Researcher ,and I investigated the satisfaction and demand of the market in the line of mobilephone,bank,car and so on.
My company appreciated my efficiency and caution.
2005/03--2006/08 KFC Start Trainer
My major responsibilities are to serve customers and train fresh members.
After working for two months,I broke the sale record of the resturant,and was award gold-badge from the Province Sale Manager.
In August 2006,I was dispatched to Chinese Yachting Association representing KFC to provide high level service for athlet

答案

i have read your resume very carefully.it is quite correct.i find no misspellings and your sentences organize well.but i find it hasnot been finished maybe.right?you should add something at last.this ...