请帮忙看一下这个英文简历中的自我评价有无问题

题目

请帮忙看一下这个英文简历中的自我评价有无问题
Self-evaluation:
I’m integrity,easy-going and with pleasant personality.Have positive work attitude.
Work seriously and sense of responsibility.Good ability to learn,Ican accept and understand the new things quickly.
Ability to work well with others.Good communication skill.
I love the wonderful things.The color colloceation of clothes I have own opinion,a higher-quality of requirement for clothes
I concern about the fashion trend,whereas for fashion I have own view.
这是我刚写的简历的自我评价部分,写完就觉怪怪的~第一次写英文的,请帮忙指出改正

答案

你写的这个问题好像比较严重,我看了你的大体意思,给了一个差不多的：I am a totally committed individual with pride in being direct,spontaneous,and communicative.Accepting challenges is the foundation of m...