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帮忙修改一段话,主要是语法~
wolves are mammals.Compare with human,wolves not have high IQ,but they also have typical behavior of mammals.For example,wolf have strict hierarchy,division of laber between the gender and the cooperation between partners.Like human,wolves are the typical social animals,they have strict hierarchy.Wolves are similar to human.Both have a head of the family.For wolf,the family unit,the head of the family are strong couple.In human's family,also have 1 or 2 people decide to a family life direction.In the wolves group,female wolves have strong family values,some female wolves voluntary feed other wolf's cub.Sometimes they can form ‘kindergarten’ mode.Male wolves look for foods and protect female wolves andtheir cub.Conversely,human feed other people's children for earn money,sometimes,male stay at home take care of children.Wolves successful catch prey rely mainly on cooperation.In similar way,human always achieve the goal by cooperation.

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Wolves are mammals. Comparing with human, wolves don't have high IQ, but they do have typical behavior of mammals. For example, wolves have strict hierachy, division of laber between the gender and the cooperation between partners. Like human, wolves are the typical social animals, they have strict hierarchy. (This sentence can be interpreated as, the human also ahve strict hierachy which only happed in feudal society.) Wolves are similar to human, both ahve a leader of the family.For wolf, the family unit, the leader of the family are strong couple. In human's family, also have 1 or 2 people to decide a family life direction. In the wolves group, female wolves have strong family values, some female wolves voluntarily feed other wolves' cub. Sometines they can form a "kindergarten"mode. Male wolves look for foods and protect female wolves and their cub. Conversely, human feed other people's children for earn money, sometimes, male stay at home take care of children. Wolves successfully catch prey mainly rely on cooperation. In similar way, human always achieve the gtoal by cooperation. ( You should put the similarity in one paragraph and difference in another paragraph for better logic and understanding. And you can do better in the comparsion)