托福作文一篇,请求赐教.下面是我自己写的作文,请大侠和老师帮忙看看我这样的水平能的几分?以及不足之

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托福作文一篇,请求赐教.下面是我自己写的作文,请大侠和老师帮忙看看我这样的水平能的几分?以及不足之
Should children be required to help with household tasks as soon as they
are able to do so?
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Children should be required to help with
household tasks as soon as they are able to do so.Use specific reasons and examples to support your
answer.
It has been discussing about a controversial issue that whether parents should let their children do household tasks when they are old enough.As far as I know,most parents in China require their children to do housework when they are in proper age like 15 years old or so.And I do agree with them.It is very important for children to do some sorts of housework as they are able to do it.
Admittedly,there are some bad consequences if parents ask their children to do chores early.As we all know that playing is the major nature of children.They spend much time playing games such as sports,computer games and hobbies.They would

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你写的很好!