In the love river .We are fully convinced that everybody must been loved the other half of them .The

题目

In the love river .We are fully convinced that everybody must been loved the other half of them .They don`t want to part with her or his lover ,unless the death coming .Every tiny girl wants have a strong shouder like a beautiful bird be in the possession of a slpendid tree.Home ,warm and carm .Every succeed man wants to have a graceful woman be with him .Like an rare treasure is in possession of a economical man .
TO love and to be loved is the is the greatest happiness of existence.
If you don`t think so .
Try to love a person.
不是不是 然后想说下 part with 能这样用么 分开 其实 我们老师 是让用 not unless 和 be fully convinced that 和be in the possession of sb 和be in possession of sb四个词组写文章的
请指数我的错误 和改正 我还给加分的

答案

part with是想表达“分开”的意思吗?如果是,应该是part company with/from sb. 这是“离开,分手,断绝关系”的意思.
还有,我个人觉得We are fully convinced that everybody must be loved by their lover.顺一点.
succeed是动词,不能修饰man,可以用succeeded.
（个人意见,仅供参考哦!）