图画式记叙文

图画式记叙文

图画式记叙文

  写作典例:

  请仔细看一下下面的图画,注意图画中的细节:

  假设你是李华,在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨,你的目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料,报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。

  注意:1、目击者应该准确报告事实; 2、词数100左右; 3、结尾已为你写好

  剖析:本题图文结合,审题时要重视细节。

  1 明确写作要求:

  本题要求写一篇目击者的报告,用第一人称写;

  2 认真审图,确认全部信息要点:

  ①图中的环境条件;

  ②人物位置(此点对完成本题十分重要);

  ③人物活动;

  ④人物表情;

  ⑤空间结构;

  ⑥图中的全部附加文字(英语和汉语)。

  3 确定内容要点:

  ①时间:2000年2月8日早晨7点15分;

  ②地点:公园路公园门前;

  ③我正沿公园路向东走;

  ④一辆汽车从第3街向右拐,驶入公园路时撞倒了一位过街的老人;

  ⑤汽车未停,沿公园路向西开走;

  ⑥汽车是黄色的,车牌号是AC864,司机是一位女性。

  One Possible version:

  It was 7 : 15 on the morning of February 8, 2000.

  I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didn't stop but drove off at great speed heading west. I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864.

  About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.

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