短文改错 （共10处错误，每改对1处1分，共10分）Once there was boy. His mother was very fat but talked
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短文改错 （共10处错误，每改对1处1分，共10分）
Once there was boy. His mother was very fat but talked too much to him. He didn’t want his teachers and classmate to see her. Every time the parents’ meeting was held, he would ask a beautiful lady to attend it instead her. In return, she paid her 50 yuan each time. One day, he was serious ill and lost consciousness. So he sent to hospital by his teacher. Three days late he came back to life and got to know his mother had been looking after him all the time. He was so thankful that he cried and had told his mother how sorry he was for that he had done. |
答案
小题1:boy 前加a
小题2:but改为and;
小题3:classmate改为 classmates
小题4:instead 后加 of
小题5: she 改为 he
小题6:serious 改为 seriously
小题7: sent 前加 was
小题8:late 改为 later
小题9:去掉told 前 had
小题10:for后 that 改为 what |
解析
试题分析：
小题1:boy 是可数名词，前加a，句意：从前有个男孩
小题2:他妈妈很胖和他说话太多，是并列关系，不是转折关系：but改为and;
小题3:考查名词：teachers是复数，classmate也应该改为 classmates
小题4:instead是副词，要是接宾语 后加 of
小题5:根据句意应该是男孩每次付给他50块钱，she 改为 he
小题6:修饰形容词ill应该是副词seriously
小题7:句意：他被老师送到医院，用过去时的被动：sent 前加 was
小题8:表示“几天后”用a few days later
小题9:和cried并列用过去时told
小题10:for后面的宾语从句，从句中缺少宾语： that 改为 what
点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。 |
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短文改错（共10小题;每小题1分，满分10分）
My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He did not want share things with other people. For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place I couldn’t find. Then he ate it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. That is, a game of tennis making him very busy. He did not care if something what he did made people anger. For instance, on one night he played strong and loudly music till four o’clock in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps grandma with housework, helps mom with cooking and helps his classmates with their lessons. |
All over the world people enjoy sports. Sports help to keep people healthy and happy, and to live longer.
小题1: They buy tickets or turn on their TVs to watch the games. Often they get very excited when their player or team wins.
小题2: Football, for example, has spread around the world. Swimming is popular in all countries near the sea or in those with many rivers. What fun it is to jump into a pool or lake, whether in China, Egypt or Italy! 小题3: Think how many lovers to skate or ski in Japan, Norway or Canada.
Some sports or game go back thousands of years, like running or jumping. Chinese wushu, for example, has a very long history. But basketball and volleyball are rather new. Neither one is a hundred years old yet. 小题4: Water-skiing is one of the newest in the family of sports.
People from different countries may not be able to understand each other, but after a game together they often become good friends. 小题5: One learns to fight hard but fight fair, to win without pride and to lose with grace.| A．And think of people in cold countries. | | B．Sports help to train a person’s character. | | C．Not a few people participate in different sports competitions themselves. | | D．Many people like to watch others play games. |
E．People aren’t inventing new sports or games.
F．Some sports are so interesting that people everywhere take part in them.
G．People are inventing new sports or games all the time. |
短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
One day, there is a blind man sitting with a sign by his feet, that read, “I am blind, please help. ” A creative publicist was walking by him and observed that the man only had a few of
coins in his hat. He put a few of his own coin in it. Without ask for permission, he took the sign, turned it around, and wrote a new message. He then placed it back and left. Later that afternoon publicist returned and noticed that the hat was almost complete full of coins. The blind man recognized his footsteps and asked if it was she that had changed the sign. He wanted to know which the publicist wrote on the sign. The publicist replied, “I just changed your message because people could understand it. ”He said goodbye and went on his way. The blind man didn’t know the new sign was “Today is spring but I cannot see it”. |
A Carefully edit it
B. Keep thank-you letters short
C. Just do it ------ and do it quickly
D. Be genuine in your appreciation
E. Stress some of your key selling points
F. Add points not addressed in interviews
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Tips for writing a job-search interview
thank-you letter
小题1:_________________
You should try to send out your thank-you letters within 24 hours of your interview---- no longer than about two or three days afterward. If you have a hard time writing letters and don"t want to write any, fight that urge and force yourself to write something. Studies continue to show that the vast majority of job-seekers do not send thank-you letters. As a result, by doing so, you will stand out from other applicants. The speed is of great importance, so you can either email your thank-you letters or drop them off the next day.
小题2:________________
Write your thank-you note from the heart. Everyone values authentic communications, so rather than using a boring thank-you letter from the Internet, use your own words and feelings to write your letter. Find a way to express your genuine feelings of appreciation and connection with the interviewer. One word of caution: Don’t give fake praise and appreciation; keep it honest and simple.
小题3:________________
One of the main goals of an employment interview is to determine if there is a good fit between the interviewee (you, the job-seeker) and the employer. Thus, one of your key goals in your thank-you letter should be to clearly express your strong fit with the organization. At the same time, it’s also good to mention a few of your key selling points ------ points that exactly match the requirements of the position you are seeking. Even a thank-you letter is a chance to market yourself.
小题4:_________________
Job interviews are stressful situations and even with excellent preparation, we can sometimes forget to mention something that may be a key selling point. If that happened to you, no worries as you can add the point in your thank-you letter. As you are summarizing your fit with the position and employer, you simply add the additional point you forgot to make in the interview.
小题5:__________________
One of the worst things you can do is to write an amazing thank-you letter, but realize after you sent it that it had a misspelling, or poor construction. Especially check and double-check the spelling of the name of the employer. Write a draft of your letter and come back to it later to edit it. Read it aloud to check how it flows. Have someone else read it for errors. Review your final version carefully before sending it. |
| My wife and I went to a supermarket, there we bought some cold drinks and cakes. After we came out of the supermarket, we noticed that in the front of the supermarket was a nice little garden with benches for people relax on. We sat there and started enjoying the things we have just bought. There was ten small cakes in the bag and we couldn’t eat all of it. I wanted to share, but of whom? A young boy appeared. He was looking into the trashcan for nothing to eat. We had just finished three of the ten cakes. So, I took the remained pieces and gave them to him. He thanked me and ran away in a happily mood. |
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