阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。What my mother does drives me crazy. She calls me at

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阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
What my mother does drives me crazy. She calls me at 10:30 pm every night to make sure I’ve arrived home safely. If I accidentally miss her call, she will keep calling all my friends and roommates until she "tracks me down".
As a 20-year-old lady in Beijing, sometimes I have to ask my friends to be quiet so that I can pick up my mother’s phone call, telling her a white lie that I’m already at home.
Recently I ran into a matchmaking meeting, which is held in a park and specifically designed for single white – collar workers in Beijing. The interesting part is that all of the attendees are single people’s parents, eager to look for a life partner for their children.
One mother told me that her 33-year-old son is busy with his career and has zero time to find a suitable girl for himself. So she goes to the matchmaking every week, trying to find her son a perfect bride.
She guaranteed that her future daughter-in-law doesn’t need to worry about anything for she has prepared an apartment and a car for them, and if they can’t find a kindergarten near the apartment she has bought, she will buy them another one. Looking at hundreds of middle – aged parents standing in the cold outdoors in a freezing winter trying to build their children a perfect future, I suddenly understand my mother more.
【写作内容】
1．以约30个词概括这段短文的内容；
2．然后以约120个词就“父母的过分关爱”进行议论，内容包括；
（1）请举一个你或你周围的周学得到父母的过分关爱的事例；
（2）谈谈你对此事的看法。
【写作要求】
1．在作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

答案

The author, a 20-year-old lady, took her own experience as an example to show that today too much care is paid to the Chinese children by their parents, even when they have already grown up.
What my mother does drives me crazy. She calls me at 10:30pm every night to make sure I’ve arrived home safely. If I accidentally miss her call, she will keep calling all my friends and roomates until she "tracks me down".
As a 20-year-old lady in Beijing, sometimes I have to ask my friends to be quiet so that I can I can pick up my mother’s phone call, telling her a white lie that I’m already at home.
The author, a 20-year-old lady, took her own experience as an example to show that today too much care is paid to the Chinese children by their parents, even when they have already grown up.

解析

这篇作文分两部分，第一部分用30个字概括文章，要求学生有很强的概括能力，还要表达出文章的主题来。语言精当条理清楚。第二部分是议论“父母的过分关爱”的问题，要点包括；一个你或你周围的周学得到父母的过分关爱的事例；并谈谈你对此事的看法。说明文章可以分两部分，一是用过去时表述一件相关的事，再就此事发表自己的看法，应该是一般现在时，句意使用高级句型和短语，文章连贯问题。