求一篇英文作文关于网络虚拟世界的advantage and disadvantage,词数120-150.

题目

求一篇英文作文关于网络虚拟世界的advantage and disadvantage,词数120-150.
最好批改网80+,

答案

The advantage and disadvantage of internet
As the technology is developing day by day,internet became closely with our live.The internet has being changed ou life a lot.i think internet make us very convenient to get informations.we can learning by internet,it can make us eruditely.We also can buy thing through it instead of going shoping.
However,as saying goes,every coin have two sides.The internet is no exception.It has the advantage and disadvantage .The disadvantage of internet,i think it make us spend to much time in playing e-games,moveis,and something bad we do not have to know.
As i said,every coins has two sides,we should chose the right one.if we use the internet right.it can help us do many things and make our life easy.therefor,we do not need to worry the disadvantage of internet.we should use it with our mind.