英语翻译

题目

英语翻译
Beloved teacher:hello!I have five grade students,although I my classmates in front of you is always grow kids,but you to teach us things unequivocal on weekdays,after your hands,and has left us from the original a white paper into a portrait of small pictures.You always try to learn to become a joy,You let us know how to make an honest child,give play to one's own advantage,and mend your own faults.You always care for our study and life,you're always trust; You let us know,no matter how noisy,outside in your class,we will find a study of silence,and the tolerance and laughter and excitement...When the class I don't listen attentively,you not blame,patiently deceived me,When I quarreling with classmates,you did not scold,guide me should do well between the classmate of unity.When I naughty forgot homework,you have no strict-we criticism,and charged next time,I will finish,When I was learning has been achieved in a little bit of progress,you will not pity to praised me than I was happy,appear...My spring is in your praise,my summer in your smile,my fall in your criticism,my winter in your work.Thank you for my teacher!This salute!
你们可不可以帮我写一篇 介绍自己寒假的英语作文？

答案

觉得这段话有些问题.
我的翻译如下：
亲爱的老师：
您好!
我是您五年级的学生,尽管我和我的同学们在您的面前总是长不大的孩子,但是您平日总是一心地教我们东西.经过您的培育,我们从一张白纸变成了一幅幅生动的小图画.您总是让学习变成一种乐趣.您让我们知道如何做一个诚实的孩子,让我们注重发挥自己的优势,弥补自己的不足.您总是关心我们的学习和生活,您总是信任我们.您让我们知道,无论我们在课堂外如何架闹,但在您课堂上,我们总是安静地学习,在您的课堂上有容忍,有欢笑,有激动.当我在课堂上不认真听讲,您并不责怪我,而是耐心地开导我.当我和其他同学吵架,您也不责骂我,而是引导我们同学之间应该像一个团体.当我淘气时忘了做作业成绩,您也不严厉地批评我,而是让我下次补上.当我学习上有一点点小的进步,您一点都不吝惜您的赞扬,好象您比我还要高兴似的.我的春天就是您的表扬,我的夏天就是您的微笑,我的秋天就是您的批评,我的冬天就是您的工作.
谢谢您!我的老师
此致
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